YOUR POEM
I really loved your poem
about the whales.
It was very sensitive.
Why don't you write more like that?
Why don't you do more poems like that one
with the whales
and the sensitivity
and the sea and surf spraying
over all the images?
You know what else you could do?
You could write a piece about octopi
and how they always get tangled up in blue ink
and how silly it is
to be an octopus.
Why don't you write one like that?
Or, you know,
you could write a poem
about having sex with an under-aged sea urchin
and how that's gotta hurt.
How they're all pricks or something.
You can have that one free of charge.
Anyway, I really loved that one piece you did.
It was sensitive
and beautiful
and short.
So where do you get your ideas?
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